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My poem


look at this tear as it falls from my face...


can you see all the pain, all the discrace...


have you ever wondered what you have done to me....


you have taken so much yet gave back nothing...


i can never forgive you for all that you've done.....


the wounds will never heal, the scars will never fade...


the memories will always stay with me, i will take them to the grave...


yet i will always love you, that will never change....


but i will always feal this sorrow, always feal this pain...


i love you but i hate you more...


im sorry that i feal this way, i guess that its just me.


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do you like my poem?



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Meg


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(((((((Princess)))))))))),


YES!!!!! I love your poem.  Is it your original work?  If so, you have talent.  I hope you cultivate it :).


Keep posting,


Maria123



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You put so much feeling into your poems.  Keep it up I love reading them.


Hugs Mary



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Mary


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Princess,


Your poems say say much of what we all feel.  Ithink your great Keep it up.


Nikkilou



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Nikkilou


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Yes Meg,


I love your poem & have felt the exact same way!


What makes true art is the ability to evoke emotion is your audience, you definetly have great artistic potential...  keep writing girl!   



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leo


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Hi Princess,


Keep posting your great poems.  You have a natural gift for poetry and should keep writing.  Your poems tell us of the sadness you feel and also of the strength you have in your soul.  What a beautiful girl you are inside.  Your Mum gave us the special gift of you, we are so lucky to have you come into our lives.  Luv Leo xxx 



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